Kusan (done)

[kusan]

Your Username: Kusan
Age: 13
Other Characters: none


CHARACTER
Basics

Character's Full Name: Kusan Ishita
Nicknames: Ku
Character Gender: Male
Character's Age:13
Birthdate: July 27th
Employment: Student
Deck?: He mainly likes to toy with the enemy allowing them to win then he puts some of his better cards out their on the field and quickly turns the table.
Appearance:


History:
Kusan was born to rich a family,so as others,he always got what he wanted,money,food,toys,clothes,anything he wanted.But because of this other people were intimated by him and wouldn't even talk to him in fear he might do something to them or what not.He tried trying to fit in with the other kids so he decided to use a bit of the money he had and went to America were he bought a deck of cards to play with the other kids.But when he came back his parents were dead.

Having barley any money and only so much entitled to him till he can use it all at age 18,he had to move and live by himself in an apartment.Here he practiced his skill until he became very moderate level at it.He still hasn't mastered the game but hopes to become good and get his name put down in the history of the game.







Personality: Around Friends:



Lists

Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Likes: COOKIES,dueling,nice people,freinds
Dislikes: mean people,un-fair rules,card stealing
Fears: Losing his cards and freinds


Extras

Abilities: He not really good at anything else except dueling
Extra:
Roleplay Sample: (Provide a roleplay sample using a humanoid, but put it in quote using these tags

Light was on his laptop typing away fast.He was in Putting grades,who was there that day and what not.He looked down at one name that said "Theresa." He looked at it and said "Looks like i got someone skipping my class." He then put his lap top up in his bag and stood up.He did a small yawn and toke a few steps forward when he ran into a girl.He looked down at her and said "Sorry,didn't see you there." He then thought Hmph, looks like another victim,but,she could be of use. He stuck his hand out and said "I'm Light Yagami,and you are?"

remember to remove spaces)


That was from another site i play at,Death Note High,so yea,want it Yu-Gi-Oh related just tell me

[Senna Rylee]

Overall, this app is pretty good, but there are a few things I need you to do for me before I can accept you...

Your grammar and spelling is kind of off and makes it difficult for me to follow what you're trying to say. Please put this in Word or some other decent word processor and check your punctuation so that it's easier to review.

I'm also not 100% certain about your character's history in regards to where he lives... it is Japan, right? As this rp takes place in Japan (Domino City) and Egypt, so I hope I got it right in regards to thinking that your character merely visited America.

I need to see a bit more in personality... maybe a couple more sentences in each paragraph? And expand on who he is and not just how he acts around people.... tell us as much as you can about him. Give him some substance... he's actually pretty interesting.

Every character has strengths and weaknesses... please fill in this section. Also, your rp sample should be in quotes (just remove the spaces in the tags) and that's just about it. A few quick things here.

If you choose to fix these things, then Bakura or I shall return and review it once more.