My Deck!!!

[Mokuba Kaiba]

Well not that I can use this for my character buuuut...its one I have in my briefcase of cards and YES I do carry one like Seto Kaiba XD. Its a speedy deck but not as quick as the ones with Destiny Draws and all the other destiny hero stuff...I'm not that rich to get those so I'd get thrashed in tournaments. >.<

Monsters - 21

3x Armageddon Knight
3x Dark Armed Dragon
3x Darklord Zerato
3x Dark Nephtys
3x Cyber Valley
1x Jinzo
1x Dark Magician of Chaos
1x Mystic Tomato
1x Destiny Hero Dasher
1x Sangan
1x Snipe Hunter

Magic - 11

2x Allure of Darkness
3x Trade In
1x Brain Control
1x Heavy Storm
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Monster Reborn
1x Premature Burial
1x Lightning Vortex

Traps - 8

1x Trap Dustshoot
2x Escape from the Dark Dimension
1x Return from the Different Dimension
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Transmigration Prophecy
2x Dark Bribe

[Yugi Mutou/Yami Yugi]

lol my friend is pretty dang rich and his dad used to sell Yugioh cards, so he got A LOT of them. He kept a whole bunch of them in a briefcase like Kaiba's. There were more than 8 good decks in there.

As for your deck:

Nice. Very nice. I would not change it (except to maybe add a few other traps). I'm just glad you're not gonna be using it... as far as I know.

[Yukiko Kouryuu[Seluna Olympia]]

I see one problem...Too many high level monsters. o.o; Other that...Follow Yugi's advice.

[Raku]

there's really no promblems but i suggest since this is one of those new type of dark decks maybe u should add 1 more Mystic Tomato and Giant Germs, it's perfect for those types of decks and very helpful.

P.S. I dont think u need Dasher

[Mokuba Kaiba]

I was thinking about taking dasher out because I only use him to Special Summon Zerator, Jinzo, Dmoc, Nephtys. I think another mystic tomato might help...don't know.

[Yugi Mutou/Yami Yugi]

I was thinking about Dasher too, but he may be useful. Special Summoning a powerful monster and getting a few monsters in your graveyard for the effects.

And I would say Giant Germs and another Mystic Tomato would probably help a bit.